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      PrompTuesday: The Roman Indiscrection


      June 24th, 2008 | by amanda | General

      It is Tuesday and time for another writing prompt from San Diego Momma.

      Here are PROMPTuesday’s rules:

      You must write your entry in 10 minutes. This encourages top-of-mind, primal thinking before the ego and judgmental brain kicks in. Just set a timer, make your kid count to 600 slowly, whatever. It’s an honor system. And I trust you.

      • Keep to 250 words or less.
      • Please have fun. Don’t put pressure on yourself. Together, let’s rediscover the simple joy in the writing process.
      • Post your submission in the comments OR post in your blog and leave a link to your blog in the comments.

      The Prompt:

      You’re in a bookstore. You see stacks and stacks of books, but one in particular catches your eye. Something about the title. You’re intrigued. You pick the book up, open it, and read the first paragraph. Now you’re hooked. What is the title of the book and what did the first paragraph say?

      My Response:

      The Roman Indiscretion

      Jane asked her cousin Catherine, “Did you pack the new ribbons we bought at Hennesy’s this morning? I don’t know if they will be in fashion in Rome but Mr. Hennesy did say that they were Italian ribbons. ”
      “The Italians are so far behind the London times. I am sure we will be looking to us for the latest in silks and taffetas. I did pack the ribbons and the new green silk gown for all the balls we will be attending.”
      “Really? Do you think that we will be invited to balls? I can’t wait to dance with the Italian boys.”
      “Yes, Jane, of course we will be asked to balls and dinners. My mother’s old friend, Countess Girotto lives there. And don’t be in such a hurry to meet Italian boys. You have heard what they do to us nice English girls. Keep your eyes on the English men, is what I say.”
      The cousins boarded the ship to Italy early the next morning with Catherine’s mother, Mrs. Adams.
      Mrs. Adam’s warned them on the boat ride, “Be careful not to fall in love with an Italian men. It is not respectable in our little English corner of society. Do keep your propriety and modesty in check ladies or I will be forced to send you back to London.”

      4 Responses to “PrompTuesday: The Roman Indiscrection”

      1. myra Says:

        are you alcott or amanda? this is fabulous! (btw, i fell in love with an italian. they don’t all live up to their reputation.)

      2. Deb Says:

        Amanda: Do Jane and Catherine heed Catherine’s mom’s advice?

        What happens next? What happens next?

        Great tone throughout this piece! Seems like it’d be a lot of fun to read what happens after the first few paragraphs.

      3. dawnomite Says:

        Nice going, Jane Austen 2.0!!

      4. Pete Says:

        The book that I imagined was a “Landscaping and Patios for Dummies”, so the first paragraph was more of a “Make sure you have all the right designs and materials and tools…” Thus, <> nothing Pulitzer worthy in my noggin!

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